Watermelon
Crunch! The taste of the disgusting fruit floods my mouth
like a tidal wave.
Swallowing the disgusting chunk of the fruit washing out the taste. Crunch! Slurp! I take another bite of the fruit it's so mushy and disgusting it feels horrible like a horrible smell but on my taste-buds it feels terribly horrible. I spit out the pips in disgust. Sniff Sniff I smell the fruit it smells like nothing. Have you ate something
this disgusting?
This writing is about my watermelon writing! I like that I used science words.
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